Fairytale Flames

Filling up

This already full cup

The air sighs

Delaying tragic

Seam popping

Metamorphasis

Of a good deed

Gone wrong.

I

Solitary I

Dies alone

Twisting and turning

Amongst this new

Ground

Full of new hopes

And dismal dreams

Laid to waste

In fire.

Reviews

[The Message]

This is possibly one of your best poems, in my opinion. The word choice and flow is perfect for the (perceived) message being sent.

[Gregory H.]

Wow...your poems are addicting...thanks for the comment...Nice job on this poem...

As Always
Gregory

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

such a gorgeous near abstract poem. you bring these sharply crystalline phrases to mind with a clarity i've seen in few poems

it draws me in and makes me want to read more..

[Jason]

I don't think I have ever read a thing of yours that I didn't completely relate with, and/or love to death. I guess I just love your style, but I must say that there is a certain level of genius that you lay into everything you pen...like a brilliant stitching....knitted so perfectly. Excellent work!