Fairytale Flames

Fairytale Flames

A Poem by ICE

Filling up

This already full cup

The air sighs

Delaying tragic

Seam popping

Metamorphasis

Of a good deed

Gone wrong.

I

Solitary I

Dies alone

Twisting and turning

Amongst this new

Ground

Full of new hopes

And dismal dreams

Laid to waste

In fire.

© 2010 ICE


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This is possibly one of your best poems, in my opinion. The word choice and flow is perfect for the (perceived) message being sent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow...your poems are addicting...thanks for the comment...Nice job on this poem...

As Always
Gregory

Posted 11 Years Ago


such a gorgeous near abstract poem. you bring these sharply crystalline phrases to mind with a clarity i've seen in few poems

it draws me in and makes me want to read more..

Posted 11 Years Ago


I don't think I have ever read a thing of yours that I didn't completely relate with, and/or love to death. I guess I just love your style, but I must say that there is a certain level of genius that you lay into everything you pen...like a brilliant stitching....knitted so perfectly. Excellent work!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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