Grey

Grey

A Poem by ICE

The angry clouds painted the sky

With cement.

Unmoving, grey, and uneven

Whilst the birds

Screamed in a chorus of disarray,

Shrouded dreams, and jaded agony

In mornings' light.

© 2010 ICE


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This sounds like many sleepless nights in agony.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a powerful poem in a few short lines. It show sadness a touch of anger and without tell what the problem is. Great job one this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful in its brevity. I am loving your rhymes in this. To me the poem depicted a scene of coming rain--a silent pouring of sadness. Wonderful job Ice. This poem took my breath away and left me wanting for more.

-Alex

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow..this is some powerful imagery. I like the way the skies were so impenetrable.
Great work. Sad piece with a light of hope near the end.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 3, 2010
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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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