Beautiful

Beautiful

A Poem by ICE

Beautiful red flower
Fragrant in the sun
Swaying in the breeze
The day far from done
Don the light in
Striking soliloquy
Leave the wind breathless
In your wake.
You are a beautiful red flower.

~Ice 
April 9th, 2010  

© 2010 ICE


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very nice..

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the way you describe the flower in this poem. You make its beauty known. This is a short but descriptive poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like this, simple but mnice. great ujse of imagery and soliloquy- i have a new word to look up. lol! :p Afew minutes later... hey i know wat it means now, i solilioquy all the time lol! I talk to myself. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great imagery_ I Ioved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice I am not in favor of soliloquy it is too rarely used

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prince wrote a song titled "Beautiful & Blessed. Find that song and during the instrumental part read your poem to it. Awesome, Love it! thanks for reviewing my poem "A Cloudy Afternoon Thought"

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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