Calla Lily

Calla Lily

A Poem by ICE

Leave it to me
To just write words
Instead of meaningful lines
Across your face.
I too was once like you.
Young and opinionated,
But then they came
And took my youthful voice
Away.
Calla lily sequined thought
You are Incandecence,
Radience,
Let it be remembered
That you shouldn't 
Be taken for naught.
So leave it to me
To write meaningful lines
About the way you smile
While traceing patterns of
Love across your face.


~Ice

© 2010 ICE


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This is a creative and beautiful poem. the flow of the poem is easy to follow and the last two lines are my favorite. Love the twist at the end.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the creative tone to this it shows your not too shy to speak. As most people are shy. This makes the reader feel directly spoken to and by that the reader feels welcomed to the poem. I love this and it has given me inspiration for my next poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice write..youth often speaks without thinking..age forget what they wanted to say..It is hard either way..lol and God bless..Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very interesting poem that had a great flow and tone! I loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting I think it matters what we say

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sentimental and full of love.. wonderful feeling emitting throughout this great freeflowing write. I also felt a tremendous amount of passion and serenity within it.. AWESOME!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem felt so personal..I felt like I was intruding on someone elses
privacy. The sentiments were a joy to read. This one was a real beauty.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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