Fight Spells 3

Fight Spells 3

A Poem by ICE

I feel as if 
I'm chasing your

Through lines
And lines of 
Telephone cords

Making direct paths
in digital impressions
Forged out of
serapic memory

Left prone
To the unsoundness
of our love.

© 2011 ICE

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I can feel the ache in the memories of this lost love. The imagery of so many lines of telephone cords tangled upon themselves as an allegory of the miles of pain in separation, both physical and emotional, is powerful... Write more.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When you argue over distance or the phone it makes it harder to patch things up. It makes it more difficult and harder to deal with. You have expressed these thought clearly in this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 7, 2011
Last Updated on May 7, 2011




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