Immortal

When will the Goddess of Immortality call upon a hero?

This world needs a hero whom cannot be felled by any evil.

This world needs a hero whom cannot deter to evil.

This hero must have Immortality--Immortal.

This world is falling in the hands of destruction.

There is no curving around such catastrophe; This world shall perish.

Unless an Immortal whom is chosen by the Goddess should arise,

This world has no hope of a tomorrow.

Reviews

[Katelyn Gilcrease]

Interesting! I do agree that the world needs some guidance to steer itself away from the distructive path it has begun to make its way down. Your wording was nice as well. Good job.

[Stephanie Knight]

Thank you very much. I was up late one night and I was thinking deep about the world and about video games and I linked both somehow.

[Katelyn Gilcrease]

You're very welcome! You did a good job! At times - in a way - the world itself is its own video game. You have to do things the right way to succeed, and many times before that you have to face failure. The only difference is that in real life you don't get a do-over if you die.