My Heart

My Heart

A Poem by Rose F.

I let you in…

And you berated me

I let you in…

And you underestimated me


I’ve allowed this to happen before

And I told myself it would never happen again

I let myself fall for you

I called you my best friend


You crushed me

My little battered heart in your big hands

I’m too weary to go on

I’m done with all of these commands


I am me forever and for always

I’m not changing for you, little boy

You don’t respect me

You can’t love a toy


I am not evil

I have a standard of how I wish to be treated

I stayed and I let you break me

Because all I wanted was to be needed


We had it all…

But you made it end…

Just remember…

I let you in…






© 2011 Rose F.

Author's Note

Rose F.
Just written. lots of typos and emotion. I'm hurting and I really don't need criticism. Just understanding. I know how to write. >.>

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and he's a d****e.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its incredible. Very intense. I can tell that it must have been very cathartic to write. sometimes, I think pouring raw emotion out, without the polish and overthiking we all do, can create something incredibly beautiful in its honesty.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 8, 2011
Last Updated on June 8, 2011


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