Frozen

Frozen

A Poem by Illegitimate Artist
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Ah, winter mornings...

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Frozen crystals fall.

 

Shimmer in the morning light.

 

My car they attack!

© 2008 Illegitimate Artist


Author's Note

Illegitimate Artist
Nothing like scrapping a sheet of ice from your car at 4 in the morning ;p

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I llike it... although I dont know why (but it does read a little like one of those awesomely simple books the teacher read when I was, like, five or something...), and for the life of me, I can't figure out what on earth a haiku is...
Thank god you're here!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So few words, saying so much! Barbara

Posted 15 Years Ago


LOL

What an unpleasant twist.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Witty poem, short but sweet, filled with synchronic words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, that was to cute. I remember when i was young having to do that before mom would drive me to school. When i grew up, i just turned the car on and hit the defrost button! lol Sigh.. technology. Somethings are good about it! :)
Great little ditty!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 8, 2008

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Illegitimate Artist
Illegitimate Artist

West Middlesex, PA



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