Spiritual Autopsy

Spiritual Autopsy

A Poem by Rob Santana
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G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

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Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

© 2017 Rob Santana


Author's Note

Rob Santana
Good vs Evil, me against both...

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oh brother, can i relate to this...raised catholic, all those years with the nuns and the propaganda ---

pray for your friend who is lutheran because he won't be able to get to heaven...he is the wrong religion...ugh!

fear, obedience and other wonderful nouns to describe a religion of guilt...

i totally relate and agree with this write.

jacob

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Oh that must have been so confusing. Brainwashing academy. Thanks for reading.
Wow. Well written my friend. Some vivid imagery there. Makes me want to dust off one of my old acrostics and post it. That last part though, chilling.

-Caradoc

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much Caradoc. Your read and review means a lot bro. I would love to read your acrosti.. read more
Caradoc

6 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I might post it a little later. Have a good one and keep it up.
This is a great acrostic. And I don't say that often, it's not my favourite form, but you did it well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

It only took two years for someone to notice that, hahaha. Thanks KL.
Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

And of course, it would be ME. LOL.
Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Hahahaha, of course!! Who else would it be.
this poem could have turned out really cheesy, but your lines really drew away from that. enjoyed it a lot, and love your word usages

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Haven't seen you in a long time Natasha, nice surprise. Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed it... read more
Natasha

6 Years Ago

Yes, I want to get back into poetry now and be more active in general on here! thanks for noticing! .. read more
This is a very thought provoking pen Rob.How would we fare in this battle of good and evil that rages in us all?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

We all battle with good and evil everyday. Thank you much V.....
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

Yes that is the truth.You are very welcome Rob :)
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Pax
your really good at this my friend, the battle of good & evil, you describe so well in your own views... Great!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much Pax. Appreciate you stopping by.
This is pretty brilliant, that's all.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Hahaha, thank you very much.
Great Poem!!! Loved it, the ending was the best

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Black Star. I will be visiting your work tonight after work. If you don't mind.
Black Star Adept

7 Years Ago

No problem, was a great read. I do not mind at all, please let me know what you think about it/them.
Great write and truly enjoyed the twist.. Good work my friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Appreciate your visit Amos. I will be doing some reading tonight. Hope you don't mind me stopping by.. read more
Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

Appreciate your visit Amos. I will be doing some reading tonight. Hope you don't mind me stopping by.. read more
A. Amos

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome and take your time no worries

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Added on December 27, 2012
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