Spiritual Autopsy

Spiritual Autopsy

A Poem by Rob Santana
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G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

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Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

© 2017 Rob Santana


Author's Note

Rob Santana
Good vs Evil, me against both...

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I loved the vocabulary, it creates great imagery. In every line there's a word that really stands up to me, I liked that. It's very nice; great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the awesome review Martin.
The evil are merely cloaked in good masks... :) Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"They" can only possess a weak vessel. Spirtually weak you say. I couldn't agree more. They jump the bridge because some-one else says it's a one way ticket to bliss. But for some, there's always the weekend confession.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

haha,right people get to start over every Sunday.....BULLSHIT.
Epicness
Reminds me of Silent Hill 4 and "Tomb of the Mutilated" mixed together.

Posted 8 Years Ago


haha wow this was really cool brother.
It started of telling a story of how people would gather together and mourn the death of a lost one, probably a disturbed soul in this case, makes me picture a case of possession where nuns are called over to pray but these nuns all have a lie they conceal which the devil reveals. Oracles called in to drive it out with their spiritual mambo jambo.. They're trying to make you repent, worship obey come back .. or die!...and the ending is great.. you're penned spiritually weak. Lol in like 10 lines you told an entire story. You're amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


KeeD

8 Years Ago

Its a Japanese style of poetry, containing 17 syllables
KeeD

8 Years Ago

haha and yeah man I love your work :P besides Eric Cox you're one of my favorite horror genre poets/.. read more
Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

oh!!!! okay, Dude really? Damn thank you Keegan,really thanks. Eric Cox is one of my favorite horror.. read more

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Added on December 27, 2012
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