NEBULOUS

NEBULOUS

A Poem by Rob Santana
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Raging silence

 

                  Reality severed

 

Painfully punishing myself

 

Pounding fist, lacerating flesh

Leaves me colorful

Squinting my eyes to view my future clearly,

 

Nothing but a blur,

 

          Animosity    -      Rabid thoughts

 

 Transparent soul

 

          No conscience

 

I hold the skeleton key

Nothing left but sinister debris

The stench of vile matter

 

Forgiveness    -       inevitable

 

Ripping your souls to shreds

With my demented aggression

 

Fanatical worshipper

 

Bringer of pain,

your loss,

 

I pound your bones into dust

© 2013 Rob Santana


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Rob Santana
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Dark, tough, and full of boiling feeling. There is something musical about your work that I find fascinating. It has its own built in rhythmic drum beat that gives it a lot of force and propulsion. Excellent work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


DAMN!!! I was pissed off here. This is about my parents. Very charming right? sensitive and new age, hahahahaha. Whatevs!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Layi Tate

6 Years Ago

Hahhahahhahaha!!!!! I guess not .....
Rob Santana

6 Years Ago

Oh trust me I can get real annoying! !!!!! Hahahaha
Layi Tate

6 Years Ago

Me too hhahahah! !!!!!!!
Amazing !!!!
Ripping your souls to shreds

With my demented aggression

 

Fanatical worshipper

 

Bringer of pain,

your loss,

 

I pound your bones into dust




Posted 6 Years Ago


A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning great poetry...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh, I can relate to this!! We want to literally tear ourselves up at times but somehow some bit of sanity keeps us from doing so!!
Great lyrics!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rob Santana

7 Years Ago

ver tiny bit of sanity!!! haha. Thanks Sheila....
I think that this is very well constructed, excellent writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Woooo, vent it baby Creeper, it has a good beat and I can dance to it. ;-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda.
I realize you have stated these are lyrics, but I really like the way you have presented them here. The whole structure just lends itself to the emotion and fluidity of the piece.
It's just a great piece of work, Creeper. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

Hey hey hey! What's happening Rogue. Thank you for your comment. This one came out so easy and fast... read more
gotta say this....no one writes angry and scary like the creeper. this is more grounded and tangible than many of your writes though, and reaches into parts of the reader that cling to your words. nicely done, yeh, i can see this being a song...easily. great stuff!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

Thanks Quinn, I'm 40 years old and I still have some childhood anger and rage in me, thanks mom and .. read more
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

that's okay dude...i am almost 59 and i still have childhood rage i have never vented
Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

OH S**T!!!! Uummmm now that's rather strange to me, however it's show's self control. Well done!
Poignant full of anger well conveyed !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

Hey moon how are you! Thank you for your R&R.
MOON

8 Years Ago

I am well , been away for awhile. Hope you well.! Take care.

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