NEBULOUS

Lyrics

Raging silence

 

                  Reality severed

 

Painfully punishing myself

 

Pounding fist, lacerating flesh

Leaves me colorful

Squinting my eyes to view my future clearly,

 

Nothing but a blur,

 

          Animosity    -      Rabid thoughts

 

 Transparent soul

 

          No conscience

 

I hold the skeleton key

Nothing left but sinister debris

The stench of vile matter

 

Forgiveness    -       inevitable

 

Ripping your souls to shreds

With my demented aggression

 

Fanatical worshipper

 

Bringer of pain,

your loss,

 

I pound your bones into dust

Author's Note

Lyircs

Reviews

[Tasha]

I loved this Creeper! The imagery and anger are wonderful. I have missed your words. Great job!!

[Rob Santana]

Glad you liked it Tasha thank you.

[Tasha]

No problem.

[ms. barrie]

I really enjoyed the seething anger of the imagery, great choice of words and the way you you arranged them here.
amazing meter,very lyrical. your words are indeed very deep and raw, that it cuts
right through you. brilliantly penned. thanks for sharing :)

[Rob Santana]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading Barriejoy.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, CREEPER :)

[Shadow Paradox]

I love it! I actually made up a tune in my head while reading this. I feel anger pulsing from each line and I can relate to this at the moment. Your style is unique but at the same time its awesome~

[Rob Santana]

That's cool!! I also have a tune in my head for these lyrics, haha. Anger indeed, childhood anger still raging inside of me! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and the review.

[Souladareatease]

AHHH this is driving Creeper!!!
definitely deep as always!!!
but the rhythms pound----bones into dust actually.
Aggressive and telling of the double-sided man thoughtful/Raw

[Rob Santana]

Double sided man, haha good job!! Thanks for the review.

[Muse]

Presentation spot on! It demands the reader to stop and pause at every word. Reflecting...disgesting the aggression that you dare to share. Pounding the bones to dust..."I think I just felt a lump in my throat."

[Rob Santana]

You got it, that's how it's to be read. uumm, Muse? what's up with your profile pic? All I see is neck, hahaha. Are you up to your neck in bullshit!! haha.

[Souladareatease]

lol I think she is poor lass--:)

[KeeD]

Madness, We need to jam together man, this is insane.. I can picture mouthing these sick lyrics whiles listening to the song on my ipod. Loved it brother!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Kee! Glad you liked these lyrics..

[Nick.B]

I found this poem...hmmm...kind of epic, especially the last line very dark...great job

[Rob Santana]

Damn, I'll take "kind of epic" haha. Thanks Nick appreciate it!!

[KatDarkness]

brilliantly agressive :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you

[Pax]

you put some powerful words in your lyrics my friend...

Raging silence
Reality torn
~ a strong emotions torn by silence... an emotional release on the: "demented aggression"

simply awesome!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Pax....

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Dark tone and engaging poem. Beautifully written.


Ripping your soul to shreds

With my demented aggression

The 2 lines magnified the instense progression of the story.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Marc, this piece brought out some old childhood aggression. I wasn't expecting that, but hey it was released.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome, yeah I agree it is genuine :) that's good to release it, in order to move on.