Beautiful You

Beautiful You

A Poem by Just Another Writer
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Beautiful - having beauty; having qualities that give great pleasure or satisfaction to see, hear, think about, etc.; delighting the senses or mind.

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You fake a smile every day.
Struggle to ignore their whispers,
Their gossip,
Their stares.
You try to be strong..
You try to hold on.
You need to.
Your world is falling
Apart
And you 
Need
To
Be
Perfect. 
You need the good grades.
You need the perfect figure.
You need to keep up the mask of happiness.
...But I see you.
I know you're hurting.
I know you struggle
To keep from listening
To those comments
All of the
Jerks
Make.
I want you to 
know
That you don't 
Need 
To be strong--
I'll hold you together 
If you break.
I'm 
Here.
Please don't change.
Don't push yourself
Too
Hard,
Because I love you..
And you.. You're 
-Beautiful-
Don't you know?

© 2012 Just Another Writer


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I really enjoyed reading this! This is a great write :)
the statement you are making is so very true...we all need to be ourselves.

Please don't change.
Don't push yourself
Too
Hard,
Because I love you..
And you.. You're
-Beautiful-
Don't you know?

You couldn't have said it better :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I absolutely LOVE what you did with the number of words on the lines! A great poem with lots of raw, genuine, relatable emotion :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is descriptive of what high school can be like for someone who is an outcast. it's a lot of pressure and it's nice that you have a friend who will be there for you and comfort you. this is an excellent poem for both content and form.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this. A very powerful write. People do tend to strive to be flawless.. but no one can ever be. We are humans. We make mistakes..
I love the strength in this poem. It gives power.
Don't change for it is you who makes you yourself.. =D Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed reading this! This is a great write :)
the statement you are making is so very true...we all need to be ourselves.

Please don't change.
Don't push yourself
Too
Hard,
Because I love you..
And you.. You're
-Beautiful-
Don't you know?

You couldn't have said it better :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed reading this. Without being very specific, you've projected the feelings of empathy for someone close who is hurting very well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 15, 2012
Last Updated on April 19, 2012
Tags: beautiful, perfect, gossip, whispers, hurting, perfect figure, strength

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Just Another Writer
Just Another Writer

Nowhere,, NY



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