Happy

Happy

A Poem by trippy kitty

I was looking at you and for once
you were looking at me.
Your eyes were like autumn and
you just looked so f*****g beautiful
on every level.
I was holding your hand and you smiled
at me. You smiled at me.
That was when I realized how f*****g happy
I was.
It was like, a giant rock of depression just
lifted off my back when you smiled
at me.
That was when I realized that this wasn't
a dream.
This was all reality.
A girl like you does exist. 
A girl like you does actually like me.
You kissed me and I kissed you back.
I was smiling like an idiot the whole time but 
you didn't care.
I told you how happy I was and you
blushed and I couldn't help blushing too.
And something snapped in my brain when you said,
"I know. Me too."
It's so idiotic. 
It's so retarded. Love is so f*****g retarded.
Or, that's what I thought.
You changed my point of view.
You changed me altogether.
Thank you, Amber.
I love you.  

© 2011 trippy kitty


Author's Note

trippy kitty
So yeah....some pretty fucking cheesy stuff but I really don't care :P

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This was disgustingly cute. *Vomits up a kitten*
That's how cute it is.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awh, this is sweet. :3
And P.S. I've read like.. 4-5 of your things and noticed you say f**k like, alot. XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


I admire the transformative power of love, and it's way more cute from the beginning, I mean, when depression is still more raw in the youthful brain. Love is a greater power, the more emotional we are, I would assume.

Nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it its nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This isn't cheesy at all--it's actually very sweet. I really like this one

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well this started out so cute.. and you turned it into reality (i don't mean for that to sound as if I didn't like it, I did) I myself am a hopeless romantic, forever will be and the idea of love both scares and fascinates me to the depths.. this is probably, to me the most raw of it. That feeling of 'fake love' a well written piece, most relatable to this generation.. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sweet, I don't think it's cheesy. It's a poem from the heart, and I loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


soo cute !

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is sweet and king and loving and very cheesy! :P But it is well, and wonderful, and great and exciting and warm and I have go to stop saying "and"! XD Thanks for the post!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so neat.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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