A Poem by Once upon a time

The pain of never being able to bear children.

You will be a mother,
My God told me.
You will be a wonderful mother,
My heart told me.
You will be loved,
My soul told me.


You will never be a mother,
My Doctor told me.
You are broken,
My pain told me.
You will never be loved,
My defeat told me.

© 2010 Once upon a time

Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Author's Note

Once upon a time
I have never written poetry before, so I'm not sure if this would be considered a poem. Just some thoughts that seemed to have a rhythm.

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from the spring of hope to the darker landscapes of devastation~ you've drawn this poem with deep heart and deeper give~amazing!

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is really good! I enjoyed reading it!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on August 27, 2010
Last Updated on August 27, 2010
Tags: love, hurt, pain, children, birth, motherhood, mother, god, soul, heart, broken, doctor, defeat, pof

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