Hidden Within

Hidden Within

A Poem by Once upon a time

I draw and write short "poetry" to accompany. Unfortunately without a scanner you cannot see the drawings, but the poetry is here.

There once were wings;
Now replaced
By mechanical things.

All the secrets of life,
Locked away with time.

Who holds the key
To release my dreams?


© 2010 Once upon a time

Author's Note

Once upon a time
I guess it's relates to the beauty of the natural form. People are beautiful and innocent and eventually all the beauty is replaced by electronics and entertainment. When we lose our natural state, we lose the answers to ourselves and to life.

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Loved this, especially the first stanza. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago

I like this poem. You asked some good questions and left a strong ending to create more questions. Very hard to write short poetry with reason. You did a outstanding job with this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Like the brevity in this-- words to ponder over.


Posted 13 Years Ago

This is genuine. Most people cannot say so much with so few words. Beautiful work.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on September 17, 2010
Last Updated on September 17, 2010
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