VocaHazard

VocaHazard

A Book by 6PENNY
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In the near-future songs are lost and its up to Miku Hatsune and others she meets on the way, to bring back the only language that all can understand. <(Vocaloid FanFiction)>

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I think your attention to detail is wonderful and your description of your protagonist is superb, however using hiragana as you character's way of talking just doesn't fit. I understand that its miku, but she is capable of speaking english so you should try to use english to describe the way she talks not japanese. Especially since miku has variations with her speech like accents/formality that can be mistranslated so easily. Also most people won't know what miku is saying .

TLDR; Use your native tongue to show your characters personality in a way all people can understand.

Posted 7 Years Ago


One Lost Anti-Hero

7 Years Ago

I understand what your saying, but if you don't know what the words mean isn't it just a bunch of me.. read more
6PENNY

7 Years Ago

Alright I see what you're saying. Thanks for the input, I'll be sure to fix that sometime soon.
One Lost Anti-Hero

7 Years Ago

no problem. I actually wanted to do the same thing you did, but then someone told me, "why are you w.. read more

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Added on February 19, 2015
Last Updated on April 18, 2016
Tags: Vocaloid, Huloid, Meiko, Android, Music, FanFiction, Miku Hatsune, Kaito Shion, Songs, Apocalyptic

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Salem, OR



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