A Sin I've Learned

 

Only you can wash away the tears

For only you knows how to heal

You cannot rely on others to stay by your side

For all they will do is turn to hide

This is a lesson I have learned

For how can you let someone in

When we've learned it's a sin.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

The message is clear and concise. It paints the image of the big bad world and the little us, and how so many of us have stepped outside our bubbles and were beaten back.

Yet, what is life with risk? How would people learn or grow with out throwing themselves into the frying pan everyonce in a while?

This poem is perfect example of the dark side. But I think the other side of the coin must be considered.

My mind through that out before I could sensor it! Sorry! :)

Nice Work :)

Eternally Your's
Aaron

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You know what that is so true,
Very nicely said, and enjoyable to read.
Amazing!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow i never thought of it that way, certainly gives me something to think bout... your right you should never rely on anyone but yourself.

[just is]

Straight and to the point
enjoyed this
You have taleant
And I do enjoy reading you stuff.
You are very creative as well.

[Wildecat]

Couldn't get any clearer than this. Nice write.

[UpComesDown]

scary but true... i dont think i should but i feel the same way

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful write ....... love the message displayed in this .... nice rhyme.... great job on this one.

[Angelic Darkness]

Powerful, and the rhyming works well together.
To let someone in when we learned it's a sin....wonderful
line! AD

[Spoken]

very true and poignantly written. We as a society are slowly growing more and more cut off from others... seems only you can help you these days.. but there are a few of us "goodies" out there. You express yourself very well. Lovely :)