Choco truffle pie..

Passing by a cafe on the road
I saw a very eye catching board
It read 'TO Day's SPECIAL' with a list of few delights.
And a choco truffle pie specially for Friday nights.
I was pulled in by the fragrance so divine.
The freshly baked pie was only going to be mine!
In less than a second I grabbed myself a part.
Alas! it fell down before I could satisfy my heart.
I sprinted to get  another but before I could say a word
She disheartened me by saying, "Reserved"
How could I resist the pie?
How could i wait a week?Sigh!
But then what I did shocked me too
Snatching away the piece, like a Concorde I flew!
Hiding in the crowd , my pie I ate
Heaven! I felt licking the mousse chocolate.
Suddenly I realized what wrong had I done
But it's fine to have a little fun! 
Accepting my apology ,the owner laughed at my reply
And now I'm invited often to have a custom made pie.

Reviews

[Ruth]

I love this lol
Hard to resist, a slice of that pie in humour's delight lol
Cool!
xx

[StacyPerry]

Cute write.

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Ha ha, loved this!

[Theresa]

Okay reading this right before I go to bed not a good idea because now all I can think about is chocolate pie. Very creative. The things we would do to satisfy a craving. I also like that it's a mini story. Nicely done.

[Dalebear]

I absolutely loved this poem, it made me hungry for chocolate truffle pie. I thought it was funny and I would love my own custom made pie. I loved the layout of the poem to

Well done
Dalebear

[MoonlightIce]

I loved it! It made me very hungry,its kinda funny in a way too,nice job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good food make us hungry and desperate. I like this story. I do understand why little boys would steal the apple pie on the window. I like the ending also. A excellent story.
Coyote

[RJM]

choco pie! I love the lightheartedness of this and how it's just so true about everyone who loves sweets and awesome pies :D

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this light hearted poem about choco pie. This had me laughing and it is nice to be silly and act like a kid every once in awhile. Life is too serious. I try to remember to act like a kid every now and then to enjoy life.

[Sonia]

This was light hearted and cute. And of course who can resist chocolate? :)