Hall of FAME

Hall of FAME

A Poem by Inder24
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This poem depicts around the path where one has to keep achieving and fight till they reach at that level where they always wanted to be

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Life is a dirty game
there is no shame
You gotta keep going through
and be on the top of the game

There is no line
to achieve that fame
You gotta keep going through
till satisfaction comes in name

Once you achieve 
there is no stepping back
Many will try to revenge and stab
keep fighting till they lose their stack
cause you are one of a kind
and look for the success to find
Cause you are sitting in the HALL OF FAME

© 2014 Inder24


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Inder24
Writing after a long time :D :D . Do leave your honest opinion :)

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See it all the time, people fight tooth and nail to reach the top and once there, all and sundry are out to fell them. Good job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Life is a dirty game and I wonder if anyone truly wins. Perhaps we win by default? Once you achieve, there is no stepping back. This is true

Posted 5 Years Ago


nice rhyme scheme and written well

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inder24

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This has a fine rap/pop feeling, that comes from the short couplets, a good write full of energy from a young talent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inder24

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sir Leslie :D . means a lot :)

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Added on November 20, 2014
Last Updated on November 20, 2014
Tags: Inspiration, Success, Life, Hall of fame, Inder24

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Inder24
Inder24

Ahmedabad, India



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well, i usualy write songs and poem when i m depressed or sad more..

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