A Poem by Inder24

This poem depicts the life of a teenager who feels alone at some point of hi life. Being a student myself who has to stay away from his home, I tend to get emotionally weak , so that's what this is.

Life tends to be hard and in the mind begins a fight,
and sometimes we tend to Cry in the middle of night,
thinking we are alone and no one is there this time,
but it's not true as life is a roller coaster flight.
Sometimes we miss people and are not able to connect with them,
but that doesn't mean we are left alone in this mess,
It's just that they are not physically present,
But if you need, they'll come back no matter where they are  Present.

Sometimes we feel left alone and get some depression,
Seeing other people's life, our mind raises objection,
but if you allow your Thoughts to be shared,
then every troublesome memory can be spared.
It would be like a Wallflower blooming on a dry wall,
Even a single Candle is enough to illuminate the dark world,
So look ahead in your life even if you feel uneasy in any form,
as the sun shines the brightest after a dark storm.

© 2016 Inder24

Author's Note

ignore grammar problem, writing after a long long time so please give me your suggestions and in which area should I improve myself and do tell how the poem is .

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Great write...very deep .

Posted 5 Years Ago

An optimistic poem. a little sunshine. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Enjoyed this, as far as I can see the grammar is fine, and the line length and balance make this a good job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thank you sir :)
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3 Reviews
Added on May 16, 2016
Last Updated on May 16, 2016
Tags: Teens, Emotions, Life, IPS, Hope, Cry, Standout, NeverGiveUp



Ahmedabad, India

well, i usualy write songs and poem when i m depressed or sad more..

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