Papered Heart

Papered Heart

A Poem by Inner Rain

Cut me out from your parchment

Fold me in half, admire my figure

Make the lines straight

Make the creases indurate



 

Make me shipshape

Don't tear me, mend me with tape

Don't strike me down with my worst fear

I shan't be your bait, i rather disappear



 

Make me wonder, Make me ponder

Will you learn to think of me fonder?

Will it be now or never?

Hopefully it will be happily ever after



 

Cut my heart in two

Make it fair, make it even

Cut it right through

Half for me, half for you

© 2009 Inner Rain


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What a neat poem! I really like this. Firstly, because it matches my display name. Hahaha, but anyway, I thought that you epitomised the whole essence of a paper heart really well. You chose some excellent vocabulary which worked as a major advantage to the overall feel of the poem. I love the stanza:
'Make me wonder, Make me ponder
Will you learn to think of me fonder?
Will it be now or never?
Hopefully it will be happily ever after'
It just flowed amazingly! I would never have been able to come up with a stanza like that!
The only real issue I have with this poem is the ending. I feel that, for such a strong poem, the ending is a little weak and that it doesn't really feel like a complete ending.
However, this was a really sweet piece, which was very well-executed. Great job,
~PaperHearts

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What a neat poem! I really like this. Firstly, because it matches my display name. Hahaha, but anyway, I thought that you epitomised the whole essence of a paper heart really well. You chose some excellent vocabulary which worked as a major advantage to the overall feel of the poem. I love the stanza:
'Make me wonder, Make me ponder
Will you learn to think of me fonder?
Will it be now or never?
Hopefully it will be happily ever after'
It just flowed amazingly! I would never have been able to come up with a stanza like that!
The only real issue I have with this poem is the ending. I feel that, for such a strong poem, the ending is a little weak and that it doesn't really feel like a complete ending.
However, this was a really sweet piece, which was very well-executed. Great job,
~PaperHearts

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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