Close My Eyes Forever

Close My Eyes Forever

A Poem by Inner Rain

A Poem

I want to lay in my bed and sleep
To be wherever you may be
But if i closed my eyes forever
Would i one day wake and find you next to me?
If all the world were young
Like our hearts once were
Would we sit and watch it all
Pass by as the autumn leaves fall?
If i could have one sole wish
A selfish dream to make true
I would close my eyes forever
Just to see me with you

© 2011 Inner Rain

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Nice kick to the teeth in emotion, I like that in poetry. Nothing is forced but flows on its own natural level.

Nice Job.

Posted 7 Years Ago

that is really good!!!!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

This one just makes you sigh and think about love for a few. I can feel this one tug against the heart. Very nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is the torment of Love. I'm addicted to the feeling ,but is it worth the pain.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Damn this is freaking great I love it really brings up old memories and past friends great job this is really deep and emotional

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 29, 2011
Last Updated on November 22, 2011


Inner Rain
Inner Rain

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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..


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