Secrets Stay Behind

Secrets Stay Behind

A Poem by Inner Rain

Creatures scuttle about, jump about
The wind is blowing through the trees
The cold gives me nothing but doubt
It is more a gale than a gentle breeze

When will the snows come?
Must the weather prolong my wait?
A violin song is all i can hum
No words to eat upon my plate

There is no rain, no storm
No ice and yet no warm fervor
Icy cold fingers, a heart at war
With the world and love's gardener

The flowers all wilt and the branches bare
The bushes tremble; in my heart a scare

© 2012 Inner Rain


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great work all your writings are impressive i love the way you choose your words and just write so freely wonderful

Posted 8 Years Ago


There is no rain, no storm
No ice and yet no warm fervor
Icy cold fingers, a heart at war
With the world and love's gardener

...........good lines, I like your writings. lovely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweet work loved it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful word-crafting! Your ideas and feelings rose easily from the words. Bravo!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I would rather feel pain than feel nothing at all. The world can jade someone gets to use to the heart break and become immune to it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

City Of The Living



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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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