Alone

Alone

A Poem by Jenna

Alone can't be bad. 
Alone can be sad. 

For some its solace and ideal. 
For others its something not to feel. 

Alone is a snake and a swan. 
It can be dusk, it can be dawn. 

For some its warmth of the sun. 
For others its life over and done. 

Alone is a path unique. 
Something you repel, something you seek. 

© 2015 Jenna


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ok.....you really have a knack for the profound and powerful! This is great. With the small exceptions of Stanza 4 Line 1 requiring a "the" before "warmth" for better musicality and for the same reason some monosyllabic word (a "so" would do nicely) necessary in Stanza 5 Line 1 (before "unique") - I have no words......my voice is in my awe!! Well freaking done!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Jenna
Jenna

Pensacola, FL



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