Heartless

She had fallen

Fallen in love

She had blind eyes

The man she thought came from above

Time went on

Feelings got deeper

She loved him unconditionally 

Sure this man was a keeper

But one bright day

The sky turned black

He took her heart 

There was no turning back

She begged him to stay

He degraded her more

Never giving up

That's what love was for 

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Powerful. The effects of love seem endless. We fail to see many things as it's essence run through our veins. No one deserves to be degraded. Passionate stuff you got here

[Nick.B]

Very emotional and heart breaking story, a true love story that ends up not so good, really like it, great job

[InsanityIsBeautiful]

Thank you very much.