Killer Feeling~ (poem)

Killer Feeling~ (poem)

A Poem by IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved
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Just a really short poem, I've got to say this is kinda my first xD

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I thought this feeling was done,well pushed aside, erased,gone. But I guess it has been keeping track, and now it has returned to stab me in the back.It takes out a knife ,sharp as hell,and as it brings it down to take my life. I can already tell,Tomorrow they'll find me dead.

- IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved

© 2013 IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved


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IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved
What did you think? Criticism welcome!

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Short and to the point is what comes to my mind immediately. I liked how you delivered it but for some reason it gave me the idea of using this line in a story I am working on... Hope you wouldn't mind if I do use it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved

7 Years Ago

Not at all! Go ahead! c: but tell me what your story is called when you're finished, I want to read .. read more
Prince Pyro

7 Years Ago

I always decide on the title at the end of the story and it's far from over at the moment but will f.. read more
IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved

7 Years Ago

Thanks! c:
I think you did a good way to describe the damage of being back stabbed. The people that back stab you aren't worth the s**t on the bottom of your shoes as much as it hurts. Hope they don't find you dead. You seem pretty awesome. xo Winter

Posted 7 Years Ago


IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved

7 Years Ago

Haha I was laughing so hard ( I don't know cussing gets me going xD ) but Thank You! c: you seem .. read more
FlatLineBeauty

7 Years Ago

Haha, yw. glad I could make you laugh.
IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved

7 Years Ago

Sure xD my pleasure!
Thank you! Yes, it is short xD Yes, you totally got what I was trying to explain. I actually wrote this during my last break up, helps get feelings out.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think this was interesting and well done. Though it is short, it tells a story, gets your point across. You put good emotion into this and it sucks to know that certain feelings are able to find away to creep themselves back into your life when you feel completely fine, as if they have disappeared.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 6, 2013
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IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved
IfThisIsLove_IDontWantToBeLoved

Chula Vista, CA



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I am a 13 year old girl, brown hair a little past my shoulder wich is usually straight and I have bangs that cover my left eye,brown eyes. I'm 5'2, 99 pounds... Uhmm. I enjoy reading creepypasta and .. more..

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