Waves Of Love

It was tiny, yet, it made a tsunami


Changing his heart entirely


As pure as water as soft as silk


Those words that you'd sent


Shocked the unbroken man within


Making him drift to you unconsciously


Promising that his heart will only ripple for you

Reviews

[Pete]

that sure is how it goes. not a bad way to be set adrift on the mer d'amour. good felling and heartfelt imagery. they are waves we can easily tread. it will take us where we dare to go ... :)

[Insight "MH"]

As they say ”make waves”, feelings are waves of emotion that strike the shores of the heart. Thank you Pete for your kind words.

[Just Kim]

This is a really good write, I enjoyed this

[Insight "MH"]

Thank you, Kym, much appreciated.

[Robert Trakofler]

I have a fascination with waves:) enjoy those ripples mr insight!

[Insight "MH"]

We all surfed on those wives and went through its curling waters :) Thank you for your kind words.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Love always finds a way - be it a wave, ripple or a tsunami.
It just has to find you, if it's true and genuine.
I liked this line, brings the essence of the poem to the fore.
"Making him drift to you unconsciously"

Very nicely written! Thanks for sharing!

[Insight "MH"]

Thank you Abholash for your kind words and I am glad that you liked it.
MH.

[Ruth]

Love has a way of entering unnoticed sometimes, woven with lovely sentiment :)

[Insight "MH"]

It does, especially, when the eyes connect and speak their language of affection. Thank you for your kind words.