A Poem by Intothemilkyway

I loved you, but not anymore. Hate is all i got.

My eyes look empty
Dead like a flower in a desert
My heart has turned black

Who ever stand in front of me
I can't see
It's all blurry
Tears have blocked my vision

I don't feel a thing anymore
If you don't care about me
It's Goodbye.

I had so much to give you
But i won't try anymore
It's time to leave you

The beginning is all beautiful
Like the rainbow ,
But once it disappears
Only saddens and loneliness remains.

We are slowly parting ways
Without even saying a word
You left me,
And iam leaving you.

Just like that our love ends.
It's sad.
But maybe in another life,
We'll meet again.

© 2019 Intothemilkyway

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...or never have met at all.

sigh, set the mood for a melancholy morning. Such a world we share...

Posted 1 Day Ago

sad but true, most people think what if … the first love is always the hardest to lose, enjoyed your poem, Intothemilkyway,

Posted 5 Days Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sad, and very relatable, while I was reading this it actually made me sad a little and think of someone I lost. Very good read.

Posted 1 Week Ago

A sad refrian indeed as the jilted lover appears to have decided life is not worth living without the person who meant so much? A flowing freeverse with pathos!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 20, 2019
Last Updated on June 20, 2019




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