The Freedom

The Freedom

A Poem by Intothemilkyway
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Words hurt,or is it you? Let the wind take em and the rain wash away.

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To be or not to be
To do or not to do
To say or not to say?

Is it really the case?
Should i,may i,can i ?
All this and i still can't say a word.
Why is it so hard he asked me.
And I said:,
"Because my little one people are the fruit of evil.
They never know when to stop.
And once they do the fruit has already done it's dead."

And so who is it to say
Whose fault it is.
They all talk, they all say things,
But do they care?
Do they love the other person genuinely ?
And so i said:
"To love someone is to put them before you"
There is us , and there is a you.
But there isn't a you in us.

And so the world crumbles.
Ask yourself why did it?
Why does the earth shake?
Open the gate to your heart
And set the world free.

Words are taken by the wind.
But when she begins to storm,
they hit the ground very hard.
So my child,
Listen to the wise cause they once said.:
"Before my eyes lies the earth.
It's so small that you can control it.
And what do you do when you have it in your hands?
You care for it."

© 2019 Intothemilkyway


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hmmmmmmmmm lots of cliche's ... works for me in this poem ... theme kind of wanders a bit .. i take this as a mother speaking to her child ... but not sure from the conversation ... there is wisdom .. at times just out of reach of me in reading ... i like how your deal with words .. so powerful ... and they can come back to hit quite hard ;{ .......... the closing admonition to care for our world would be well taken by all
E.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

2 Days Ago

I genuinely love your review.
Iam impressed how you can pick up easily things in my poem.
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hmmmmmmmmm lots of cliche's ... works for me in this poem ... theme kind of wanders a bit .. i take this as a mother speaking to her child ... but not sure from the conversation ... there is wisdom .. at times just out of reach of me in reading ... i like how your deal with words .. so powerful ... and they can come back to hit quite hard ;{ .......... the closing admonition to care for our world would be well taken by all
E.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

2 Days Ago

I genuinely love your review.
Iam impressed how you can pick up easily things in my poem.
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Whimsical and wordy. But does it really say anything I haven't heard before?

Guess how much bones weigh?

A skeleTON

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

3 Weeks Ago

The ending was perfect.
A perfect joke for the spooky season.

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Intothemilkyway

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