Kiss

Kiss

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

Just a kiss
with those tender lips.
It felt hot like 
in a winter breeze.
A spark of mind
maybe a spark in july.
Soft when you speak,
soft when you cry.
Beautiful at first,
it was alright.
Like sugar and spice.
Just a lie,
just one kiss
to make me cry.
Just one,
to make me miss,
to make me taste
the feeling of love
i never felt. 

© 2019 Intothemilkyway


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Oh-MY!

It started out so warmly romantic and irresistible, progressing so nicely and sweetly along the way, opening your heart to wondrous love … then, things turned in a sad direction, as disappointment began to take over and hurt your lovely heart.

Is there no justice for a tender girl who longs for togetherness and romance of the growing kind?
I know there is, and that it will come to you when least expected, like a huge, hot, loving kiss all over!
Excellently spoken and understood; happier, sweeter days to You … hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 4 Years Ago


Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

That's so sweet of you.
Thank you for taking your time to review one of my poems.
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

"Another" of your poems. : )
I am proud to be your fan.
just a single kiss can make your heart skip a beat

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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