Cinderella Glass Shoes

Cinderella Glass Shoes

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

Once i leave i put my Cinderella Glass Shoes
and the magic begins.
It feels like a dream, no, more 
Like reality.
Just before the time stops,
I want to still stay at that place 
That place where You & I exist 
Loving each other endlessly.

Hm mm Hmm I sing
"So this is love "
But i know
Now i know 
I beg to the stars in the sky 
That this would last 
Even if just for a bit
Before midnight
Before i wake up

A little miracle 
I beg.
But it's hopeless
The clock dings
And i wake up 
Even so
I wish it all come true.

Once i remove my Cinderella Glass Shoes
The clock moves forward
And it takes me back 
to that dark reality 
to my dark room
But i see some spark
Out of my window 
It's the stars
Even at day they shine.
I know that this fantasy
I can relieve 
once i put my shoes and go on 
with my day.

© 2020 Intothemilkyway


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i can relate to this in a certain way...reminds me of my high school sweetheart...
school and distance created an end to us....but it was similar to this...
like a moment caught in time...total affection...the carriage, the slippers...the intense time, but then midnight struck...
and it had to end.
well done,
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

Oh my, that's so sweet. I loved reading this.
Sadly most of those hard time crushes come to a.. read more



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Using "cinderella shoes" as a symbol for going to sleep, escaping reality, & dreaming oneself into a place where one would rather be . . . great work! I could follow this dreamscape escape easily & I could see this being not always the bedtime kind of dreams . . . I could see this as a person going out in her cinderella shoes, being among people, but living in her dream world instead of the real world. Now that everyone is on lockdown becuz of this virus, this poem could symbolize the way we wish we were someone else, living our lives among others again! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

Oh my , can't believe how you got everything so right. Thank you for stopping by to this poem. It's .. read more
How I met my wife
I was at a prize presentation she was receiving a prize
We met at a later day another presentation We had a dance - she was whisked away by her friends
A friend came with two tickets to a dinner dance, 'go to this address and ask her to come with you.
I got in my van (still in my dirty coveralls) Her parents weren't very impressed
My dream became reality

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

I love old time stories. This is very beautiful. Im happy your dream become true.
Wild Rose

4 Years Ago

We were both well known (in cycle racing circles) county wide & it transpired we were both looking t.. read more
Mmmm you get nice dreams
But sad that you have to return to reality

Dreams are like that
like reading a novel - once read it passes into a place in memory - to return at odd times when the file holding it is recalled in passing (looking at the memory as a stack of files in chests or in a computer)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

Dreams are like that. Love that part. Still memories can always be remembered over time.
i can relate to this in a certain way...reminds me of my high school sweetheart...
school and distance created an end to us....but it was similar to this...
like a moment caught in time...total affection...the carriage, the slippers...the intense time, but then midnight struck...
and it had to end.
well done,
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

Oh my, that's so sweet. I loved reading this.
Sadly most of those hard time crushes come to a.. read more
Hmm, better don't remove your Cinderella Shoes Girl....


Posted 4 Years Ago


Intothemilkyway

4 Years Ago

I will try . Ahahah
Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Good luck lol

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