Time moves forward. The longing lasts.

Time moves forward. The longing lasts.

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

It's Love's fault.
Is it mine?
It's definitely hers.
We both were wrong.

So quickly to fall in,
and so quick to go back,
to our daily mundane life.
Life sucks.

You said it yourself.
And you believed in it.
In other's opinions.
But,
you didn't believe in yourself.

And that's why we are lost now.
I look at the sky where it's cloudy
The clouds move fast.
And so did our time.

I remind myself of our times.
Ours,
Or mine.
Was it even a thing?
I miss you.
I miss us.

© 2020 Intothemilkyway


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Nicely written. Aah, love, when it works out it's the most beautiful thing ever; when it doesn't it instills in us a sense of loss greater than we've ever known, doubt creeps in, most of the time, we doubt our love, things don't work out, then we keep wondering till death what went wrong and why, as much as we try to get over it; but the heart does heal a little, some people's hearts, some hearts turn to stone, moving on is the most difficult thing to do

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

3 Years Ago

ahah yeah only if it works out but does it ever work?
Moving on is very hard but you got to .. read more



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So very well written, I can feel sadness in this. Nicely written and expressed

Posted 3 Years Ago


Intothemilkyway

3 Years Ago

It does have sadness. Thank you for expressing your opinion.
Nicely written. Aah, love, when it works out it's the most beautiful thing ever; when it doesn't it instills in us a sense of loss greater than we've ever known, doubt creeps in, most of the time, we doubt our love, things don't work out, then we keep wondering till death what went wrong and why, as much as we try to get over it; but the heart does heal a little, some people's hearts, some hearts turn to stone, moving on is the most difficult thing to do

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intothemilkyway

3 Years Ago

ahah yeah only if it works out but does it ever work?
Moving on is very hard but you got to .. read more
There are moments of deep connection in life, when we feel a sense of elation and fulfilment - and the circumstance overwhelms us and we can never fulfill our longings. I had this sense from this lovely heartfelt writing, of a moment cherished and a moment lost. Time overtakes us and we can only have lingering memories, a mixture of sweetness, in this case, and of loss.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Intothemilkyway

3 Years Ago

It's so real. I felt your comment. It's exactly like that.
Time heals us but we also have to.. read more
Jibey

3 Years Ago

I'm glad I hit the spot. Hope all is well for you, Milky

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