And so

I told you i can give you the world

What i meant was that,

I was your world.

But you wouldn't take it

Wasted time

It was?

Was it?

Or maybe it wasn't?

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is thought-provoking. I've always felt grand love promises are nonsense. People change & life deals shots out of the blue, so spare me the need to blow you off as you promise me the world. This poem started out like a spoof on that, due to my inherent snarky attitude about it. But by the time I finished, I was sympathetic toward the promiser. Your poem illustrates the optimistic heart (albeit blind) behind such ridiculous sounding proclamations between lovers (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Intothemilkyway]

Im in love with such a well written review. I had never seen it from such a point. Very well explained.
Thanks Margie ( hugs back)