Beautiful but ugly inside

Beautiful but ugly inside

A Poem by Intothemilkyway
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This is made for true and real love. And for one's hurting from things they have never told nobody.

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If you'd look inside
You wouldn't find nothing but a black hole
A non ending vortex spinning and spinning
That has grown roots so deep that can't be removed.
This is the hidden part that you don't see
Since on the outside is a pretty scenery
Such beautiful image that one stops and stares at it for more than necessary
The first impact of my image, of your image.
Just like a rose.
You get distracted by its beauty that you touch it without thinking that she is surrounded by thorns that cut into your skin and make you bleed.
You simply forget about that ugly part.
But if you simply love her so much you don't care about the thorns and you still try to take the rose into your hands.
Because it doesn't matter how beautiful she is on the outside or how ugly she is on the inside.
If you truly want her, then you just simply go and get her

© 2020 Intothemilkyway


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I agree dear friend. We must know the people we allow to get close. No-one know my true face now, I believe.
"But if you simply love her so much you don't care about the thorns and you still try to take the rose into your hands.
Because it doesn't matter how beautiful she is on the outside or how ugly she is on the inside.
If you truly want her, then you just simply go and get her"
The above lines, we must do. All of us. Hold ugly and beauty, sometimes inside and sometimes outside. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


The message of your poem confuses me a little bit. On one hand, I read this to be a poem about an ugly person camouflaged by outer beauty. But then the narrator professes loving her despite her ugly parts and I find it hard to believe his intentions are really that noble. Maybe he's overlooking her ugly parts, but in my long torturous history, I have found most men who choose a broken woman, do so becuz they want to dominate her. They see her as weak & controllable. They control her by professing to love her despite her inherent badness. I simply can't see this guy as having good intentions, even tho your poem suggests this is what it's about. Then your last line cinched it for me. "Simply go and get her"? Surely these are the words of a user! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

6 Months Ago

I love how you think about this poem. Im really impressed by your conclusion it's something i would .. read more
Love is strange. We may be aware of the downsides, but we are still prepared to take the risks. Love means overlooking the negatives. I enjoyed the read. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

9 Months Ago

Yes overlooking the negatives if you care about the person and they are willing to change and be a .. read more
"Because it doesn't matter how beautiful she is on the outside or how ugly she is on the inside.
If you truly want her, then you just simply go and get her"

This line really hit home for me. Something about going for what you really want and desire. Almost like a leap of faith, but also an acceptance of what baggage or obstacles may come with it. Pure. I have thought this of myself sometimes. Great work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

9 Months Ago

Indeed so. That is one of my favourite lines too.

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