Like Dreams

Like Dreams

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

My memories of you 
Everything we lived through
Shortly,
It was like a dream.
You know how dreams are short , right?

In the end it was my dream.
Not yours.
I get to live and relieve it again and again.
But like this it just hurts me.

I have to stop reliving the dream and move on.
In the end i can't keep dreaming about a dead place
of the past where in my future it doesn't exist anymore.

© 2021 Intothemilkyway


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Hard to do, but we must my dear friend.
"I have to stop reliving the dream and move on.
In the end i can't keep dreaming about a dead place
of the past where in my future it doesn't exist anymore."
To kill a memory is hard. My old dad told me. "Best way to forget a old lover. Find a new one." Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Intothemilkyway

1 Month Ago

Indeed so Coyote. :) appreciate your review
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Was my pleasure my dear friend.
Beautiful poem..thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Month Ago


Intothemilkyway

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading it.
This is a beautiful poem that is very heartfelt. And one that many of us in life can empathize with. Thank you for sharing your poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

2 Months Ago

Thank you for reviewing it .
I can relate to this poem. very good

Posted 2 Months Ago


I often say that expectations are the biggest curse in relationships & your poem seems to illustrate how that can happen. We silly humans envision a person or situation the way we want it to be, rather than learning to love what's right in front of us without any editing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

5 Months Ago

That's so true and that's why we have to see the person for what they are and not how we make them b.. read more
"In the end it was my dream.
Not yours." strong turn says i! its heck to bear a broken heart :(
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

5 Months Ago

It is my dear friend. But life goes on and we shall enjoy it till the end.
Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

might as well ;)
How I wish that those dreams did not keep repeating
Almost like a Christmas time TV show

All the old favourites
And some not so favourites that come to break your heart again; and again

Posted 5 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

5 Months Ago

I wish it did not too. But that's how we are build up in the end.
Raw with images that haunted me. The way you control and manipulate time is pretty skillful.
I immediately felt the urge to let go and be carried away by your thoughts. Well Penned.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Intothemilkyway

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your review. Really got something new that i wouldn't have said myself.

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