The whirlpool of memories

The whirlpool of memories

A Poem by Intothemilkyway


in memories I wash and get washed.
I drown in the sea of ​​memories thinking about you.
My mind floats away in a lost island.
There where you and i still exists.
Where it's us.
Where the sky is blue, and the sea calm.
A storm never happens.
The orangey sunset is wonderful and pleasing to the eye.
Like the Fantasy Island.
There where i feel safe and protected.
A nasty world full of colors from the rainbow
Which turns gray after some time.
I enjoy the picturesque view but inside me something cries.
I don't shed a tear but inside I'm crying.
Outside i smile but inside I'm dying.
I love the view.
And once I'm asleep i wake up to reality.





© 2021 Intothemilkyway


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A powerful and worthwhile poem shared my friend.
"I enjoy the picturesque view but inside me something cries.
I don't shed a tear but inside I'm crying.
Outside i smile but inside I'm dying."
I do understand the above lines. We need memories and sometimes, they can be very heavy to carry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Intothemilkyway

1 Month Ago

Thank you for appreciating my poem dear friend.
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
Woww you express in a soulful poignant musing oscillating between imagery, reality, fantasy and blending it all in eloquent poetry. Kudos for this poem! Are you Albanian wow and whats your name dear?

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

Posted 1 Month Ago


Intothemilkyway

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your review.
Much appreciated.
Yes,im Albanian 😊
seems we always wind up where we used to be

Posted 1 Month Ago


Intothemilkyway

1 Month Ago

So true. We need to make a change ahah
 wordman

1 Month Ago

yeap,you`re welcome
Sharing time and space was someone is priceless.
A beautiful write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Intothemilkyway

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your review.
Much appreciated.

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