1736 days without you, 10 million wishes for you to come back

1736 days without you, 10 million wishes for you to come back

A Poem by InvisibleShadow
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People who tell me you're in a better place obviously don't know you much you loved life, or how much you made me love life.

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I always looked up to you

From the minute I was born.

Today you're not here

And I feel so torn.

Your hugs;

Your smile, & stories. I miss it all so much,

I miss everything about you,

Even your gentle touch.

Your time on earth was far too short,

I just hope you found your happiness of some sort.

Somedays are harder to get through

Knowing I've lost someone so important

Like you.

The past is the past,

But it all flew by far to fast.

I know Kera feels the same,

But she takes after you, by keeping me sane.

                        

Iloveyou,Mom,

Nobody will ever replace you.

© 2011 InvisibleShadow


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InvisibleShadow
Just off the top of my head,

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It's a difficult experience to write about and share, I'm sure, but one you write about so powerfully. It's a beautiful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is brilliant InvisibleShadow. I was scanning through some poems looking for inspiration and this caught me eye.
I adore the title, it's just as meaningful as the poem. Keep up with the writing.
I'm very sorry for your loss

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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InvisibleShadow
InvisibleShadow

Edmoton, Alberta, Canada



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People look up to me, I'm 'beautiful' in their eyes, I just wish they'd know I was a monster inside. more..

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