A dream

I had a dream that there was no pain
There was only peace and love again
Warm smiles on faces and holding hands
Eyes seeing into souls and touching hearts.
I woke up too soon with tears on my face…
All was just an illusion in a world of fakes
I rather dream that there still can be
Someone to dream the same as me…

Reviews

[Ada]

There's a quote that says "we rarely find good company unless they agree with us." It's normal to gravitate toward people with similarities but sometimes they just aren't present. Either way this was a heartfelt write.

[Ioana Mihai]

It’s something like we live what it is and we dream what we wish. Thank you for the review Ada, I appreciate.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Hi Ioana, I enjoyed your poem ‘A dream’, the last line was such a lovely way to finish it, ‘ Someone to dream the same as me’.

All the best,

Lathen

[Ioana Mihai]

Thank you for the lovely review, very much appreciated… and that last line, isn’t it something most would dream of?

[Sami Khalil]

"I woke up too soon with tears on my face…
All was just an illusion in a world of fakes
I rather dream that there still can be
Someone to dream the same as me…"

[Ioana Mihai]

If not hope for better, what else keeps us alive?

[Sami Khalil]

All true and well. You are welcome.

[Ioana Mihai]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

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[Sami Khalil]

This had dreamscape quality to it with pure and lovely sentiments. My advice: Keep on dreaming and writing beautifull pieces.

[Ioana Mihai]

Thank you, how kind the words and flattering this advice of yours. I just let the feelings out in words and what’s turning out of it, it’s poems :)

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa! Wonderful. You are welcome.

[Unspoken poet]

I wish there was pain as well, this is really good

[Ioana Mihai]

Thank you, I appreciate
And maybe you are right, some pain may still be necessary, just too much to some is maybe not fair

[Ioana Mihai]

This poem is kind of an illusion for a twin soul…

[Unspoken poet]

i meant no pain, sorry about that, that was a typo.