Burning fire

What is this burning fire inside me
I wish someone to come to set it free
What do I do to throw it all away
It burns my heart, my all in flames of pain….
I raise my eyes upon the sky
I wait for a rain to cool me down,
Along my tears to ease the fire within
To clean and heal my heart entirely.
Sweet and beautiful rain, touch me softly…
Take care not to storm me more,
Because now I am so fragile
Smile to me with a rainbow…
Teach me how to smile again
Dreaming that I can touch the sky
And one day to be the rainbow
That would make someone else to smile...

Reviews

[Franky]

Oh my goodness. How very sweet and (sensual even? ) these words are. I love this. I've read it 3 times now. 🙂

[Ioana Mihai]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate very much your feedback 😊

[Franky]

Can I ask..,...was this meant to be sensual? Or am I out in left field?

[Ioana Mihai]

Kind of hurting, but sweet and loving, deep, though not erotic, it was more a rescue and a soothing call, a healing love than lust, but you saw it in a different light. Now reading it in that new light it can be seen like that too. The beauty of Poems is that they can tell different stories with the same verses