Twisted

Poetry

Twisted-demented-insanity
deep ends floats disaster
Things unravel faster
Designed to make errors end
Dreams meant to ascend
Open ended sincerities to present
Sending mental pictures with dents
Catastrophe really unknown
Donate a symptom it's full grown

Reviews

[Miguel]

First of all, welcome to the site! :)
Writer's Cafe can be a pretty awesome place.

Short and simple - effective use of interesting words that bring about a feeling of darkness and disorder. I especially like the lines,

"deep ends floats disaster
Things unravel faster"

some beautiful rhyme correlation there. Well written!

~Miguel

[Ireca]

Thanks for reading, and for your review.