Twisted

Twisted

A Poem by Ireca
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Poetry

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Twisted-demented-insanity
deep ends floats disaster
Things unravel faster
Designed to make errors end
Dreams meant to ascend
Open ended sincerities to present
Sending mental pictures with dents
Catastrophe really unknown
Donate a symptom it's full grown

© 2012 Ireca


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First of all, welcome to the site! :)
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Short and simple - effective use of interesting words that bring about a feeling of darkness and disorder. I especially like the lines,

"deep ends floats disaster
Things unravel faster"

some beautiful rhyme correlation there. Well written!

~Miguel

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ireca

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, and for your review.

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Added on August 17, 2012
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Tags: Twisted, unravel, dreams, catastrophe, demented

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