True Thoughts

True Thoughts

A Poem by Amy
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Just everything that I was thinking on a certain day. One of my lighter poems, but not my best.

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I have to admit, my lower back's been hurting for,

Maybe a month.

It's raining and my world's about to lose

Or gain,

Something that isn't existential,

No matter what anyone would like to think.

And now I wonder, is my pot fired?

Because clay is pearly timelessness

That has nothing to do with big words

Like antidisestablishmentarianism

Or protegee.

The tea I drank earlier was Yorkshire Gold,

But I didn't put in enough milk

So it was kind of bitter.

Imagine, being able to summon a moving, talking picture,

Just by hitting a button labled "power".
I wonder if it'll ever be renamed
"Corruption"

That would kind of make me laugh.

Maybe I should see a chiropractor

 

 

© 2008 Amy


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that was goood. i think however it would be alot more powerful if you wrote it in paragraph from but i still liked your style.... it had a tad of sarcasim in it which i enjoyed... nice write

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2008

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I'm 17 love writing, and mostly write about my life. My poems mostly reflect thoughts that I have and want to consolidate and my short stories are inspired by random things. I love specific feedback, .. more..

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