O How the World Turns

A poem to describe feelings when you're single (maybe even a bit lonely) and you're observing other couples around you. I'm sure some can relate~

O how the world turns

   and revolves around

      a piteous thing called

         Love

O how we individuals

   engulf such pathetic 

      Emotions

O how lucky lovers are

   engaged in their

      Pollination

O how the rest of us

   who observe are on the verge of

      Vomiting

Author's Note

Feel free to critique all you like. I'm up for criticism and reviews anyday.

Reviews

[zainul]

Love the way you put your feelings.
Choice of colors look great.
Last word ,'Vomiting' sounds unwelcome.

Appreciate the lovely write.

[Chelle]

Thank you so much for the review.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear poet.