Loveless winter

Loveless winter

A Poem by Olivia Bant

Feels like a winter season
So depressing
So lonely
Deprived of your attention, consideration
Not acknowledging my importance

Desperate
Feels like I'm begging
Pleading, imploring
Craving
Only for you to love me
Do I even count for you?
Question
Like always there is no answer

I find myself in this chill of depression
Where each snowflake is like a teardrop
Softly landing on my pained heart

The stark, barren trees stand as silent sentinels
Echoing the emptiness of my loneliness
Their branches reaching out like desperate hands grasping for connection

Just as the sun struggles to break through the thick, grey clouds
Hope often fights to emerge amidst the heaviness my sorrow
Casting fleeting rays of warmth that briefly melt the ice that coats my soul

In this season, the world outside grows quiet
Mirroring the silence within me
As I navigate the long, cold nights in search of light, solace and your love
But the only thing I find is your loveless

© 2024 Olivia Bant


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Beautiful sadness, and, more than but, superb writing.

' The stark, barren trees stand as silent sentinels
Echoing the emptiness of my loneliness
Their branches reaching out like desperate hands grasping for connection'

Such visual three lines.. setting your tears free to release the meaning of your words, Olivia.

You write inscribed memories and future fears.. but - know how to leave them with true feeling, no theatricals, but truth.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Olivia Bant

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your review and your words, Emma. It means a lot to me.
emmajoygreen

4 Weeks Ago

Your writing is quite something, am only too happy to review you, Olivia. Enjoy the weekend. :)
Olivia Bant

3 Weeks Ago

Tkank you. You, too

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

58 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on October 4, 2024
Last Updated on October 10, 2024

Author

Olivia Bant
Olivia Bant

Moscow , State of Moscow , Russia



About
I'm a girl who just found out that she could bleed through poetry. Yeah, I am that girl. more..

Writing