Her Falling

Her Falling

A Poem by Ivy Smiley
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Hell is something

"
She walks in the clouds with her head held high,
she walks as if she won't fall from the sky,

one she stops walking and what does she see?
She sees herself falling,
falling in suffering she starts to burn,

pain of love and her pain of desire,
her pain and suffering begins to fire,

it doesn't hurt her, 
she just keeps watching,

flowing in the mid air when she knew was burning,
She tries to open her wings and see the light,

but the dark is caving in,
it will hurry,

tearing her skin by skin while she still is burning,
 
hell is some place you will notice,
only sees the past when it's focused.

© 2014 Ivy Smiley


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Nice writing, extraordinary and emotional, I wish I could rhyme like you , I would try to join G-UNIT team:) cool!

P.S. your photo is sooo cute! Double like:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ivy Smiley

6 Years Ago

Awe thank you (: I try lol
Hell is a living reality one faces of their own creating. Granted...some may seemingly have no choice, but it is those great ones, that in all adversity, stand up and become that which shines through a seemingly hellish situation. Paving a way for others to do just that themselves, Many people known and unknown do this. Everyone can do it. What do I "think"? I think, you have done well conveying yourself here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ivy Smiley

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review (: it's people like you that keep me thinking. Nice paragraph the.. read more
that was really good, it has alot of emotion in it :) :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Justin

6 Years Ago

yup, it is going to be amzing
Ivy Smiley

6 Years Ago

I gurantee that (:
Justin

6 Years Ago

yup, our books are going to be best sellers
"it doesn't hurt her,
she just keeps watching,

flowing in the mid air when she knew was burning,
She tries to open her wings and see the light,

but the dark is caving in,"

A good write. Thank you for penning...:)...................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ivy Smiley

6 Years Ago

Thankyou very much (: I may write some more like this.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

OK. You are welcome...:).....................
Rather nice poem...love the way U used imagery here...(:

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ivy Smiley

6 Years Ago

Thankyou (: you're very kind.

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Ivy Smiley
Ivy Smiley

Rossville, GA



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I'm a writer/novelist in fiction. I'm not normally one to write fan-fiction. I'm one to write about worlds and people who live in situations they're in. It's just my style of writing. Unique is one wa.. more..

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