She Found Home

She Found Home

A Poem by Ivy Smiley
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this is about a woman who just bought a house.

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With a swish of her hair,
it shows her kindling care,
when she closes her eyes slowly,
it shows she's safe in care,
with every our pass by in this house,
she's  more and more fond of what she sees,
she begins feeling comfortable more and more in this house,
she starts feeling sort of like a mouse,
twiddling around and around her house,
she knows it foot by foot,
all around her friends come over,
they cheer and cheer til the night is over,
and when they all leave,
she is still comfortable in the house,
she knows she found home,
and that's what she's all about.

© 2014 Ivy Smiley


Author's Note

Ivy Smiley
Please give me a review and tell me what you thought of it (:
Thank you for reading and have a great day

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Pretty quaint and I like that, the imagery was nice. A wee mouse in a comfortable place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ivy Smiley

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review (: and i'm glad you liked it.
that was really good, i can tell the woman was a hard worker and deserved something like that, i really enjoyed it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks ivy :)
Ivy Smiley

9 Years Ago

No problemo (:
Justin

9 Years Ago

:P that is y we are awesome

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Added on June 10, 2014
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Ivy Smiley
Ivy Smiley

Rossville, GA



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I'm a writer/novelist in fiction. I'm not normally one to write fan-fiction. I'm one to write about worlds and people who live in situations they're in. It's just my style of writing. Unique is one wa.. more..

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