Expressions

Expressions

A Poem by Rose Masen
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"..Til I turn blue"

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Waiting
Loving
Missing
I'll wait for you as long as needed
I'll love you with every live wire in me
I'll miss you until the other halves of our hearts reunite
Floating
Reminiscing
Seeking
I'll float in a sea of still water
I'll reminisce of your loves shelter
I'll seek out your soul with the remnants of mine
Hoping
Regretting
Blue
I'll hope for the days of reunion ahead
I'll always regret not taking your last name
My spirit is blue until you're home
Waiting
Loving
Missing
YOU.
Forever, for always; no matter what.

© 2015 Rose Masen


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Thousand miles a hundred years
Only your affections quench my tears
Through the glass as eons pass
Look through my mask
As the match is struck
I'll leave the hook with the heart you took
As you left me hanging
Even as this place is blazing
Alas I am here, still waiting
Through the ash and through the rubble
Look for me. Because somewhere
For you this heart is beating

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose Masen

3 Years Ago

That was nice. :)
Michael Leon Wilson

3 Years Ago

Aww I was hoping for back and forth banter. I find it quite helpful in the creative process



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Thousand miles a hundred years
Only your affections quench my tears
Through the glass as eons pass
Look through my mask
As the match is struck
I'll leave the hook with the heart you took
As you left me hanging
Even as this place is blazing
Alas I am here, still waiting
Through the ash and through the rubble
Look for me. Because somewhere
For you this heart is beating

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose Masen

3 Years Ago

That was nice. :)
Michael Leon Wilson

3 Years Ago

Aww I was hoping for back and forth banter. I find it quite helpful in the creative process
It shows the speaker's commitment towards her beloved as well as a passion for love... missing our loved one is a hard thing to deal with... you did a fine job to portray your true feelings in it.... it was sweet.... full ratings....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ah, I get that a lot.
Waiting for the one you loved, but at the same time your love goes with every day that goes.
Beautiful poem, you did a great job writing this one!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on January 20, 2015
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Tags: Love, Loss, Hurt, Pain, Raw, Uncut, Poetry, Poem, Heartbreak, Sadness, New, Waiting, Soul

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Rose Masen
Rose Masen

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