♥

A Poem by Rose Masen
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To the love in which I haven't found yet: I am waiting, honestly, and patiently for you to come and change my world.

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To want is to have it
To desire is to touch it.

Never experiencing it is quite a shame,
like going about life without a name.

Words should be sweet,
Light kisses leaving tingles through your feet.

You should succumb to it's warmth,
Hand in hand, with me, you shall court.

In it's grasp I'm made new,
Engulfed with feelings- clear, precise, and so true.

The weight of the world no longer mine,
Us, as one, we'll fix this, together in time.

The look in your eyes, so adoring,
erases past pain, loneliness and mourning.

I am me, you are you,
I bask in feelings that are mutually true.

I worship the ground which your feet tread a path,
2 hearts, 2 souls; well....you do the math.

You are my life, my love, my unending forever,
With you, mi amor, on our journey, we will endeavor.

So take me in; mind, body and soul,
And if need be, signed in blood, I give you my love to behold.

Each night I promise to thank the man above,
Allowing me the first time to love and be loved.


© 2011 Rose Masen


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Rose Masen
1st Romance. Reviews?

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I like how the person the narrator has become enamored with is a lover, friend, savior, and confidante. All the things a lover should be. Perfectly romantic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nicely done. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with all t he other comments. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very sweet something we all want to experience one day. Keep the good work up...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a wonderful and enchanting romance, I wish when my true love come, she will be as you describe.. Superb and a delightful read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:D. Yay. Thanks a lot everyone for the welcoming into a genre in which I never wrote upon.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A great attempt at writing about romance. I think you put a lot of work into this poem, and I think you're doing a good job at it. This poem is quite interesting to read, and shows some interesting imagery. I don't see how I would improve this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice! I tried my first attempt at romance a couple days back! It was easier than I'd thought!
Your was so much better though. You went really deep with this one, the passion burned brightly!
I think you should right more of this genre, it fits well with your writing style :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this. This is truly what everyone wants and desires, and you have expressed it nicely! Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you, hon. And thanks for catching my typo.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Tags: Love, Romance, Want, Dream, Hope, Need

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Rose Masen
Rose Masen

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