The Ghost Of My Lover

The Ghost Of My Lover

A Poem by JC

 

The ghost of my lover,
still remains.
In the corner of this room
and the corner of my mind.
In the minutes of light
and the hours of dark.
He haunts,
He taunts,
Of things that were
and may never become.

© 2009 JC


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Hinting at the prospect of what would have been--IF?
Our past relationships always seem to live in the back of our minds or they hide in some corner to resurface at the most unwanted times.
Nice reflection on it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


excellent poem, love the crisp, lines and rhymes, well written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You write very well. I could feel the sense of loneliness and desolation in the corners as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


More than a poem, this is a
purging of the nostalgia that
sometimes holds the wrong
people together.
'A neat, concise little story.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your lover, he lingers, long after he is gone through choice or circumstance. It doesn't matter, because he left his impression on you, and took a piece of you with him. Leaving you asking that damned eternal question, "What if?"
I love that he haunts, and taunts, like teasing. There isn't a yearning for him to come back, so much as you'd prefer him to be gone I think.
Nicely done, point made, in short but eloquent style.


Posted 10 Years Ago


I see this was posted around Halloween. Appropriate.

It seems like this could be extended very easily, as "things that were and never become" is enigmatic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ah so sweet to be haunted by a lover lol I can say i have thought it to be my own problem a time or two
Tate

Posted 10 Years Ago


Though rife with sadness, this is a beautiful poem. Written very smooth and it reads wonderful.

Nicely Done!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


In the minutes of light
and the hours of dark.

I love that part cause it is true that when you are heartbroken it feel like the lonely nights last forever and day goes quickly... nice little poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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I am 40+ year old native of Fargo, North Dakota, (yes I said Fargo.). I've journaled, blogged and written poetry my entire adult life, and now I am starting to write a novel, which if published, will .. more..

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