Vampire who lost his fangs

A silly poem

A handsome vampire lost his teeth
This brought him great grief
He could not suck blood
He couldn’t do what he loved
He used chop sticks instead with relief

What a ridiculous sight
A vampire with a chop sticks bite
What a way to go
It would be painful and slow
Beware of the vampire with a chop sticks bite invite

Author's Note

I was having a silly moment...

Reviews

[armin]

This is totally a different piece of writing. It made me smile reading about a vampire loosing his teeth, do you like vampires. Nice work.
I am also new, please review my poems too.

[JCWilliams]

thanks for the review i will check out your work too!I like vampires they can be fun which probably just stems from my interest of "action genre", i like super heros and pirates etc. as long as there is a little romance I'm in!